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Good afternoon, snippeteers and welcome to this week’s edition of Rainbow Snippets. I’ve had an exceedingly busy week: sold a house, finished two work projects, baked cake, got stung by a bee, and… found a plot hole large enough to drive a truck through slap bang in the middle of Swings & Roundabouts!
I’m sure it must be old age creeping in. I would have sworn blind I remembered precisely how long it takes to defrost a frozen body! But no. I was wrong. Now, I’ve got to rejig the timeline and find the guys something to do for an additional four days, when they’re most likely not in the mood for snowmobile races or snowball fights. Good thing there’s work. Jack’s that is.
In last week’s snip, we had Gareth being shown the ice sculptures in their bedroom at the Ice Hotel and turning the unexpected knowledge into a bit of a riddle to tease Jack. Today, we see Jack’s reaction. Yes, it’s over six sentences, but I really wanted to leave you with some happy fanboy Jack before it all goes to pot next week…
Have a good weekend!
From Swings & Roundabouts
“This is amazing,” Jack breathed, taking in the rendition of the Hokage Mountain in ice.
“Isn’t it just? I could name every single sculpture in the room. Not just the four on the wall. Be proud of me.”
“Every single— ”
Gareth turned them and Jack grinned when he caught sight of the figure beside the bed. “Oh, wow. That’s gorgeous. Has Nico seen this?”
“Three of our loves and a spirited mountain? You’d think so, wouldn’t you? I thought it was a rather good riddle.”
“Three…” Jack turned further. Portgas D. Ace and… a human-sized Gundam. “Gods, I want to hire the artist. Imagine having these dotted around the garden. Kakashi can sit beside the pond, under the tree. The Gundam guards the backdoor. And Ace…. I’m not sure about Ace. Daniel may have an idea.” He felt the heat in his neck and chuckled. “Yes, I know I sound like a fanboy, but man, this is amazing!”
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I love how he’s so excited that he’s landscaping with them. LOL
Especially as they haven’t bought the house yet! 😉
I agree with Jack–it sounds amazing! <3
Definitely. I wouldn’t mind having that as bedroom decor.
Careful of those plot holes. They can ruin a good story’s suspension. *grin* Nice snippet!
I’m glad I spotted it now. Though my brain’s struggling a bit, because I was happy with the way it read.
Argh, yes, those details will be the death of us, I think. I’ve done those sorts of things.
I’m not familiar with what they’re talking about here, but I like their enthusiasm. 🙂
Ice sculptures of manga characters… but yes, the devil truly is in the details. I had such a nice, tight emotional line, but I’d rather change it now.
I love his excitement in this snippet!
At least you caught the plot hole, but ugh, it’s frustrating to go back and fix it.
Once I’d got over the panic, I was grateful I’d spotted it. And I agree. I love that, after everything, Jack can get excited by such a small thing as a sculpture.
Very cute!
The ice sculptures and our fanboy’s reaction to them are so much fun! 🙂
Thank you. I was hoping for that. It should make for a nice contrast.
He can fanboy all he wants. I’m right there with him, this sounds great.
I wish someone would create a room like that… and that we’d be there to sleep in it. That would be epic!
You having forgotten how long it takes to defrost a frozen body must mean you haven’t practiced that skill in a while, right? 😀
A long while…